The Cult for my Novel?

I am writing a novel which involve a young Syrian Christian boy in Kerala whose mother had been killed by a cult and is forced to leave his village because the danger of his life. While away, he learns the art of Kalaripayyatu. Anyone, I shall descibe how the cult kills the mother. If you think I should make any improvements, pleasesay. The Cult member abduct the 24-year old mother and present her tothe cult leader. the cult leader takes the women to another room and s her in there. A week later, the young mother finds out he is pregnant. The following day, the women is presented to all cult members in a short choli and a torn shirt. The cult official lay the woman down on a floor before the m crowd in a wooden building. Withchants fromthe m crowd the leade rise his sword and slice it through her bare bellly right through her uterus where the baby was developing. Atr the executn, the women's body is carry among t m crowd with the belief that touch it will have luck