What do you think of the beginning of my student councill speech?

tena kouto ko (name) takenaoa. Hi I am (name) and I am here to tell you why I should be your next house leader. First of all I think that I will be a great house leader because of my determination, confidence, reliability and of my quick thinking. Vote for me because of my good quailites, not because of my great looks. That is just the begginning!